A reporter complained about a new TV program that you like. Write a letter to the newspaper editor.
– Describe your point of view.
– Say what you like about the show and why.
– Ask the newspaper to take some action.
Dear Mr Bradshaw,
I am contacting you regarding the article where you unfairly criticized Top Gear, namely Jeremy Clarkson. Understandably Mr Clarkson is not everyone’s cup of tea, however publicly complaining then lambasting him and the show is unfair. Their difference of opinion is under no circumstances an excuse to write a letter of complaint.
Personally, I feel that the shows ingenuity largely stems from the fact that their presenters are occasionally controversial and honest. This is unlike the modern TV shows which are bland, politically correct and just lacking any entertainment value for my liking.
I would be very grateful if you could in future editions of your newspaper ‘The Echo’ only publish positive articles about the programme. Failing this small request could you please refrain from any undue negative press.
Kind Regards,
B. Worthington
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 29, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'shows'' or 'show's'?
Suggestion: shows'; show's
...mplaint. Personally, I feel that the shows ingenuity largely stems from the fact t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, regarding, so, then, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 32.9175257732 49% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 26.3917525773 42% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 764.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 136.0 206.0 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.61764705882 4.54256449028 124% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.41495297035 3.78020617076 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12000465797 2.54303337028 123% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.801470588235 0.622605031667 129% => OK
syllable_count: 226.8 290.88556701 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4200139523 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5 76.5299724578 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167231432481 0.216113520407 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0556738911625 0.0766984524023 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0407894298455 0.0603063233224 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0993543170099 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0388630659605 0.0580467560999 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 8.37731958763 161% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 70.7449484536 65% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.02 8.71597938144 172% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.82 7.59969072165 129% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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