You have received a bill from a mobile phone company for international call charges relating to a time when you did not use your phone for international call. Write a letter to company
Complaining about this
Giving your reasons
Asking for bill to be changed
Dear Sir,
I am writing to complain you about the excess cell phone bill which has been sent to me through post yesterday. Your company have added rupees 6000 in my total bill as an international call charges, where I have never called.
I have been your well satisfied customer from the last three years with contact number 8872605060. After receiving your bill yesterday, I checked my call history where I found no outgoing or incoming call from toronto, as stated in the bill. Moreover, I use this number just for the social applications and local calls.
I doubt if there is definitely an error from your sidein making my bill. I request you to please check into the matter once so that I can get my actual bill to be paid. I hope you will go through my account details and do the needful.
Thanking you for your consideration.
Regards,
Rupinder Singh
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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Dear Sir, I am writing to complain you about the excess cell phone...
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... where I have never called. I have been your well satisfied customer from the la...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...ill yesterday, I checked my call history where I found no outgoing or incoming c...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hecked my call history where I found no outgoing or incoming call from toronto, ...
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Line 4, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...plications and local calls. I doubt if there is definitely an error from your s...
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Line 4, column 172, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...at I can get my actual bill to be paid. I hope you will go through my account det...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 713.0 937.175257732 76% => OK
No of words: 153.0 206.0 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66013071895 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50949753032 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.692810457516 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 207.0 290.88556701 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.6538917932 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.3 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.2 4.34317383033 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.388661515938 0.216113520407 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132933783541 0.0766984524023 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0829699601558 0.0603063233224 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.240832616893 0.12726935374 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0586396600496 0.0580467560999 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.