The table below shows the information about the underground railway system in six cities.
The table shows when the railway systems were opened (in years), how long the routes (in kilometers) of railway system are used, and how many people (in millions) use railway system in different cities.
It is immediately apparent that not only does railway system in London become the first railway, but has the longest route as well. Moreover, Tokyo has the largest number of passenger using railway system compared to other cities.
Regarding the year of railway system opened, the first railway was opened in London in 1863. This was followed by Paris, Tokyo, Washington DC, Kyoto, and Los Angeles, which were operated in 1900, 1927, 1976, 1981, and 2001, each.
The routes traveled by railway system has partially the similar pattern to the data opened. London has the maximum distances in kilometers of railway system route recorded at 394. Then, there are smaller number in Paris, Tokyo, and Washington DC. While the former is listed at 199, the two latter is noted at 155 and 126 successively. However, Los Angeles and Kyoto has the minimum number in about under 30.
It is clearly seen that Tokyo has the highest level of annual passengers using railway system (1927). Following this, Paris, London, Washington DC, Los Angeles, and Kyoto have a different number, ranging from 1191 (Paris) to 50 (Los Angeles).
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, moreover, regarding, then, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1099.0 965.302439024 114% => OK
No of words: 220.0 196.424390244 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99545454545 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28203095712 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 106.607317073 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572727272727 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 322.2 283.868780488 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.482926829268 1242% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.7693790888 43.030603864 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5833333333 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 5.23603664747 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250815578948 0.215688989381 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0981393149577 0.103423049105 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0906906008212 0.0843802449381 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157545812029 0.15604864568 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0934715783469 0.0819641961636 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 40.7170731707 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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