An increased number of people today change their career and living places in their lives. Is it a positive or negative development?
In modern era, globalisation creates a myriad of opportunity and possibility all over the world, and people stemming from yearning of exploring various living styles and cultures, as well as the demands in their ambitions might not satisfy to stay constantly in a single career or dwelling all the way up. Both adventageous and detrimental impact were likely to be witnessed on their growths.
For the sake of horizon, moving out from comfort-zone, unequivocally, have more benefits. Leaving a well-established position, as well as a place we were acquainted with for decades, means one probably acquire a chance to rebuild things he possessed, and thus is endowed with an auspicious time to equip skills and techniques that are vital to make an alternation. Moreover, the variance of environment always come with new relationships. For instance, collaboration with teammates of new careers and interaction with forthcoming neighbours lavish numerous chances on one to mingle with others of collective backgrounds and fields whom one can learn a lot from.
However, a well-worn notion of unbearable adaptation resulting waste of time has been advocating for some years. Inevitably, relocation might sometimes involve a handful type of fluctuation in one life. This can be exemplified by immigrants joining a new nation. Changes involve the local language, as well as the habits and regulations that the indigenous citizen have conformed to from their childhood, are crucial to perceive and incorporate to his life as soon as possible. Yet, frankly speaking, the transformation might not be trivial for adults who have their formative years passed.
To elucidate, both sides are preceding at any rates, whereas the consequence could be far-reaching in one’s life but varies depending on one’s situation. Discussion with family and partners with consulting professionals with expertise are plausible to mitigate the downside.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, frankly, however, if, moreover, so, thus, well, whereas, for instance, as well as, at any rate
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1644.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4983277592 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21276062787 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652173913043 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.6120682375 49.4020404114 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.461538462 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.61538461538 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112054850602 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0342468040659 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0422244370938 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0661350018858 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0530055456542 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.92 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.69 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.