You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The charts below show the results of a survey about what people of different age groups say makes them most happy.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given bar charts compare the survey results of different activities of below and above 30 year age group people that make them happy.
Overall, more than 50% of activities are similar in both groups such as doing hobbies, achievements at work and other factors. However, under 30 year age people like traveling and more concern about their appearance whereas other group people (elders) find quality time with family and make strong financial security.
About 22% and 31% people below 30 year age, find their happiness in doing favorite hobbies and when they achieve success at work; similar results find in above 30 year age people, 24% and 32% respectively. While other factors have 4% difference in two age groups (14% in under 30 and 10% in over 30).
Furthermore, youngers usually more worried about their look, 18% of people become happy with their good appearance. Only 14% of people enjoy quality time with family and 20% feel happiness with strong financial status.
In conclusion, both age groups find happiness in basic things while traveling replace with family and make good saving for future rather than wasting money on a look.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2024-01-15 | reverjae | 78 | view |
| 2024-01-15 | reverjae | 78 | view |
| 2023-06-07 | minhphambinh1234 | 73 | view |
| 2023-03-10 | ililmaidatuz | 84 | view |
| 2023-02-26 | giangngoc | 82 | view |
- Difference between countries become less evident each year because nowadays all over the world people share the same fashion, advertising, brands, eating habits and TV channel. Do you think advantages of this trend outweigh its disadvantages. 78
- The best way for governments to solve the problem of traffic congestion is providing free public transport in 24 hours per day and seven days a week To what extent do you agree or disagree 73
- some people say that cities with a taller building which means building cities vertically are good other people say that building cities horizontally is better discuss both views and give your opinion 32
- There is an increase in production of consumer goods and this damaging the nature. Why is this happening ? What could be done for this ? Support your writing with personal evidence examples of your own. 73
- when designing a building the intended use of the building should be taken into account as important rather than outward appearance to what extent do you agree or disagree 87
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, look, whereas, while, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 958.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 191.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01570680628 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31175400363 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581151832461 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 286.2 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3534141244 43.030603864 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.75 112.824112599 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.875 22.9334400587 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 5.23603664747 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206901694188 0.215688989381 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103541784835 0.103423049105 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0863374686802 0.0843802449381 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13834521094 0.15604864568 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0894839183259 0.0819641961636 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.