last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday. Write a letter to your friends. In your letter
1) thank them for the photos and for the holiday.
2) explain why you didn't write earlier.
3) invite them to come and stay with you.
Dear John,
It`s been so long since we have been in Italy during our holiday last month. I`m writing to thank you all for sharing some photos of our amazing trip.
It was quit long for me not to travel for any vacation, but our last holiday together was a good relief from work stress. When I decided to travel abroad, I could not have chosen a better company like you. I have enjoyed it immensely. Therefore, I would like to thank you all for your hospitality and making my accommodation so special.
As you know, I was working on an important tender with my company, and I joined the proposal team who worked on the pricing when I arrived immediately. The tender duration was so tight for us all, and we should achieve the due date of submission. hence, I could not have chance to write you after my arrival the home country.
The weather now in my country is fascinating many tourists from all over the world, so why do not you visit me and stay couple of weeks. There are a lot of fantastic places to visit if you are interested, and I am sure your will love it.
Seeing you soon,
Ayoub
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 201, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...er duration was so tight for us all, and we should achieve the due date of submis...
^^^
Line 7, column 250, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Hence
...uld achieve the due date of submission. hence, I could not have chance to write you a...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, so, therefore, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 916.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 206.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.44660194175 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38406356301 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631067961165 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 284.4 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.909608742 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.3333333333 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1666666667 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 4.34317383033 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.350033091593 0.216113520407 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123406460129 0.0766984524023 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0741274286081 0.0603063233224 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201471681742 0.12726935374 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.068436751015 0.0580467560999 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.23 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.