If you could change one important thing about your hometown, what would you change?
From a general standpoint, most of the people tend to change their condition, especially their hometown, in fact, for achieving a better circumstance people have to select the best one. On of the controversial questions occupying the mind is whether modifying the people’s living places are benefits or not. I firmly assert that my hometown needs to change fundamentally to built some green spaces and new parks. In the following section, I will elaborate my idea with some significant reasons as why I believe so on.
On the meaningful reasons coming to my mind at first is that by constructing parks, it makes more opportunities to improving air pollution. As a matter of fact, in the industrial cities there are some crucial problems about air pollution and issues related to it. In addition, should people try to increase enormous green spaces, they will have a clean air because vegetation and trees absorb various toxic gasses. An example can illuminate this claim. Several years ago, our city, by many factories such as petroleum, power grids, aluminum plant and so forth, has had huge contaminated problems in water, soil, and air. Moreover, shortage of parks have been effected this issues dramatically. Our mayor decided to create new places for planting various trees and green places and solve the air pollution drastically. Therefor, parks can provide situations for reducing environmental pollution also air pollution.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 915, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ronmental pollution also air pollution.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, moreover, so, in addition, in fact, such as, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 43.0788530466 39% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 52.1666666667 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1212.0 1977.66487455 61% => OK
No of words: 231.0 407.700716846 57% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24675324675 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 4.48103885553 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90524250706 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 212.727598566 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.662337662338 0.524837075471 126% => OK
syllable_count: 370.8 618.680645161 60% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7945979916 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.0 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.25 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 5.45110844103 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.53405017921 44% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0642837172755 0.236089414692 27% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.021611396891 0.076458572812 28% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0415977998089 0.0737576698707 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0602090912378 0.150856017488 40% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0508301093599 0.0645574589148 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 10.9000537634 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.01818996416 114% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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