Essay topics:
The diagram shows the life cycle of silkworm and stages in production of the silk cloth.
The diagram depicts the life cycle of a silkworm and the process of silk cloth manufacturing.
There are 4 stages that is from, eggs to adult moth. The process of silk cloth manufacturing includes steps from raw material to silk cloth material.
The life cycle starts as soon as the moth lays eggs. After 10 days, the egg hatch and they larvae comes out from eggs ; who feed on mulberry leaves. After 4-6 weeks the silk thread begins to develop. Within 3-6 days, the full cocoon develops.
Moreover, for the silk cloth production, the raw material is boiled in water and further deaereated. For final step, the thread is either be dyed or first weaved and then dyed.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 150, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...rom eggs ; who feed on mulberry leaves. After 4-6 weeks the silk thread begins to dev...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 33.7804878049 44% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 557.0 965.302439024 58% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 118.0 196.424390244 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72033898305 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.29587325169 3.73543355544 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33531815737 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 80.0 106.607317073 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.677966101695 0.547539520022 124% => OK
syllable_count: 152.1 283.868780488 54% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.4042544461 43.030603864 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 61.8888888889 112.824112599 55% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.1111111111 22.9334400587 57% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.22222222222 5.23603664747 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312323808574 0.215688989381 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124871195413 0.103423049105 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.149615316392 0.0843802449381 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220596380142 0.15604864568 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.17184292441 0.0819641961636 210% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 13.2329268293 56% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 61.2550243902 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 10.3012195122 47% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.21 11.4140731707 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.4329268293 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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