The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular uk school in 1981,1991 and 2001.

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The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular uk school in 1981,1991 and 2001.

The given three circular chart demonstrate. The information about a yearly expenditure on five amount sector in particular uk school from three different year: 1981,1991 and 2001. The data is calibrated in per centum.
It can be seen that, teachers salaries witnessed a increase of 10% in the first ten years, and then surged to under a one fifth in 2001. Moreover, insurance and other worked 2 percent and 28 percent in 1981 . Afterthat, the former amount was a little increase around 8 percent of the total and the latter amount witnessed sharp fall of 13% in first twenty year.
Moving ahead , furniture and equipment witnesses a sharp fall of 10% in first ten years, and then surged to under a quarter in 2001. Furthermore, resources e.g books witnessed a rose of 5% in first ten years. After that , around, A tiny fraction, 9% of the total expenditure in 2001.

Overall, the hightest expenditure on teachers salaries and the lowest expenditure on insurance in different year.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 26, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'chart' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'charts'.
Suggestion: charts
The given three circular chart demonstrate. The information about a ye...
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Line 1, column 103, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'sector' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'sectors'.
Suggestion: sectors
...out a yearly expenditure on five amount sector in particular uk school from three diff...
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Line 1, column 181, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ree different year: 1981,1991 and 2001. The data is calibrated in per centum. It ...
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Line 2, column 50, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... seen that, teachers salaries witnessed a increase of 10% in the first ten years,...
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Line 2, column 116, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...irst ten years, and then surged to under a one fifth in 2001. Moreover, insurance...
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Line 2, column 208, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... worked 2 percent and 28 percent in 1981 . Afterthat, the former amount was a litt...
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Line 3, column 13, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...13% in first twenty year. Moving ahead , furniture and equipment witnesses a sha...
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Line 3, column 220, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ose of 5% in first ten years. After that , around, A tiny fraction, 9% of the tota...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, then, in particular

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 817.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 166.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92168674699 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76316789398 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572289156627 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 236.7 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.6924426056 43.030603864 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.7 112.824112599 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6 22.9334400587 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.7 5.23603664747 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143023849873 0.215688989381 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0583518147475 0.103423049105 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0833241774824 0.0843802449381 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0928070647328 0.15604864568 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115051709708 0.0819641961636 140% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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