As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.
People rely on technology to solve thier quotidian problems and solve this type of problems, humans are using thier minds. Humans are making thier progress much faster than earlier generations with the inventions of new technologies.
The inventions of technology has been boon for humans. Earlier, without calculator humans used to waste thier precious time on calculations rather than thinking. Scientists are using a simulation software, which can solve hard problems within very less time with help of supercomputers and they can study and think on results for future inventions. By using technology, we are making progress much faster.
Humans have devloped first calculator then computers then super computer and now, computer rests on palm. This progress is positive, we are using mind to make things simpler, easier to handle.There are lot of problems came with invention of car such as climate change due to use of oil, accidents due to human error. To solve such problems, human used thier creative thinking, to devlop solar based, Hydrogen fuel based car which are eco-friendly.
Some people say, we are detoriating our thinking capacity by using technology is baseless argument. In actuality, we use it as tool not giving up our thinking capacity. We might getting slowed down in rembering things or calculations but not in thinking process.
Technology is helping us to make our lives better. Using a technology we are not detoriating thinking but when we stop thinking or imagining ways to make our lives better, we will surely detoriate thinking for ourselves.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Suggestion: progresses
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Suggestion: have; haven
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Suggestion: There
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, so, then, as to, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 33.0505617978 54% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 58.6224719101 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1335.0 2235.4752809 60% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 253.0 442.535393258 57% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2766798419 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.55969084622 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79926183685 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 215.323595506 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573122529644 0.4932671777 116% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 704.065955056 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.5330175257 60.3974514979 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.3571428571 118.986275619 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0714285714 23.4991977007 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.57142857143 5.21951772744 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204170870768 0.243740707755 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0766025240086 0.0831039109588 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0653860626471 0.0758088955206 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12445257723 0.150359130593 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0436344590917 0.0667264976115 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.1639044944 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 100.480337079 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.