You have just come back from the four-day trip. There are some problems which made you feel annoyed. To write the travel agent’s manager to
• Introduce the trip
• complain something
• require some refund
Dear Sir,
I have just come back from a four- day-to-Danang holiday which was booked with your company two weeks ago. I went there with five members in my family and all of us hoped that the trip would be really interesting. However, we got some problems which made all of us become disappointed.
Firstly, the flight was delayed for five hours without any apologies and explanation of the airline. This situation made us check in hotel too late. In addition, the hotel was so crowded and noisy that my children could not sleep deeply. I discussed this problem with the hotel management but it was not solved. Finally, the food of the restaurant was so terrible that we were fed up and had to go out to eat; hence, my spending plan changed significantly with increasing in payment.
With my above problems, I request a clear explanation and a compensation for my extra payment. Please contact me as soon as possible if not I will send these issues to your leader. I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Mary
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I have just come back from a four- day-t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, hence, however, if, look, really, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 855.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67213114754 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66701377298 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.677595628415 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 260.1 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.4213063196 44.8134815571 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.25 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.25 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.58333333333 4.34317383033 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14790550144 0.216113520407 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0504019778486 0.0766984524023 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0640168006794 0.0603063233224 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102502946905 0.12726935374 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0902033900049 0.0580467560999 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.21 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.