Nowadays, many families have both parents working. Some working parents believe other family members like grandparents can take care of their children, while others think childcare centers provide the best care. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Family is the place where life begins and love never ends. Presently, some hectic parents reckon that grandparents could take better care of the juvenile. By contrast, other deem that child care are the best option. Here I, will discuss about both of the views.
One school of thought Thinks that grandparents sets the foundation of success. To illustrate, by having older people in a house is like a great tutor, who teach the adolescent about traditional and culture which helps to broaden the horizon of mind with leaps and bounds. As a result, kids come to know about the moral values. What is more, worst situations are being easily handled by the old person because they have ample of patience level and the calm their grandson easily. Moreover, old people has plethora of live experience where they know all about thick and thin of the juvenile and grandparents lays down the foundation of successful career by giving them abundance of practical experience. Hence, no one can take the place of older people in the family.
Another school of thought reckon that childcare centers are more lucrative for the adolescent. To examplify, these centers are well equipped with salient features where children feel very comfortable and learn how burn mid night oil in cut throat competition. Thence, great deal of education is being provided by the juvenile care centers. Furthermore, playground and number of toys are available of the kids to enjoy and children here can easily makes some new friends. A part from it, adolescent come to know about team spirit and leadership by joining the childcare center.
To recapitulate, kids care center provide plethora of things to the children which is very fruitful for the juvenile. However,no one could take the place of grandparents because they are not only more experienced but also have create health environment in the house.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 340, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ', the worst'.
Suggestion: , the worst
...now about the moral values. What is more, worst situations are being easily handled by ...
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Line 5, column 448, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'make'
Suggestion: make
...s to enjoy and children here can easily makes some new friends. A part from it, adole...
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Line 7, column 126, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , no
... very fruitful for the juvenile. However,no one could take the place of grandparent...
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Line 7, column 228, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'created'.
Suggestion: created
...not only more experienced but also have create health environment in the house.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, so, then, well, as a result, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1572.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03846153846 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5931368985 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580128205128 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.2989677744 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.4705882353 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3529411765 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.58823529412 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237960802919 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0687386822412 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0483274612512 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147685260132 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0798933282615 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.