You are going to aboard for study. You would like to do a part time job over there while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help.
Give details of your study plans. Explain why you want to get a part time job. Suggest how your friend could help you find a job
Dear Friend,
I am very happy to say that I am coming to do further study in Canada. I am writing this letter regarding I need your help to get part time job in Canada and I think you are best to do help me in this matter.
In Canada I select Part time English course which is required to continue my further master course over there. Course duration is 3 months so in this time, I am free for half day and thinking to do part time job in my relevant field which help to get PR in Canada. I know that you are working in same field over there and recently I attend interview of your company and I have been selected for half hours of working day. During the interview they asked me for the reference who know me in Canada so at the time of interview I said them, I will provide it later on. Now for the completing of process they need reference.
Kindly request you to help me in this matter so I can utilize my spare time and get some money for my further study. I am waiting for your response or please call me as soon as swiftly.
Your faithfully,
Bhoomi
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Friend, I am very happy to say that I am coming ...
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Line 2, column 131, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...etter regarding I need your help to get part time job in Canada and I think you are best ...
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Line 4, column 20, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: Part-time
...e in this matter. In Canada I select Part time English course which is required to con...
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Line 4, column 199, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...am free for half day and thinking to do part time job in my relevant field which help to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, regarding, so, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 862.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 209.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.12440191388 4.54256449028 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.18705825878 2.54303337028 86% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521531100478 0.622605031667 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 274.5 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.9516006687 44.8134815571 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.2 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9 16.8248392259 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.6 4.34317383033 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315988755319 0.216113520407 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119708932528 0.0766984524023 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0777137655547 0.0603063233224 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223160168648 0.12726935374 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0135565360703 0.0580467560999 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.62 8.71597938144 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.9 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 8.62886597938 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.