You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbor.Write a letter to your neighbor. In your letter•introduce yourself•describe your plans for the party•invite your neighbor

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You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbor.

Write a letter to your neighbor. In your letter
• introduce yourself
• describe your plans for the party
• invite your neighbor to come

Dear Mr. Hoang,

My name is Truong, who is your new neighbor. My family and I just moved in town last week. Since my family have just settle in our new house and my son’s birthday is on 15th July, we are planning to organize a small party with friends and acquaintances to celebrate the birthday and our settlement on Thursday evening. However, I am worried there would be some noise that may disturb you. Therefore, I am writing this letter to ask if you are ok with the noise and also invite you to our party.

This will be a simple birthday party for kids and a barbeque for the adults. So, if you have some time, please join us. We have invited some other neighbors and I believe this is a great chance for us to meet and have some chat. Please let me know if you can come over because it will be a pleasure for us.

I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours sincerely,
Truong Nguyen

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, may, so, therefore

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 746.0 937.175257732 80% => OK
No of words: 173.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.31213872832 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26624982491 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618497109827 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 230.4 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.2201105344 44.8134815571 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.8181818182 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7272727273 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.90909090909 4.34317383033 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311204026031 0.216113520407 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107702095973 0.0766984524023 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0596341388802 0.0603063233224 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152523460145 0.12726935374 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0964708926925 0.0580467560999 166% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 8.37731958763 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.42 8.71597938144 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.21 7.59969072165 82% => OK
difficult_words: 20.0 41.2886597938 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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