The bar chart show the marriage and divorce statistics for eight countries in 1981 and 1994

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The bar chart show the marriage and divorce statistics for eight countries in 1981 and 1994

the given vertical representations demonstrate the two statistics: marriage, and divorce by eight countries in two specific years; 1981 , and 1994. The data is calibrated in thousands which is clearly and coherently represented.

Overall, it is evident that, in all regions in same years the marriage rates were more than divorce cases.
As it can be observed in first chart, the highest marriage statistics had been in America nearby 11000 people while, lowest was in France, and Italy less than 6000 per person. Moreover, the statistics of UK, and Japan was 7 , and 6 thousand people respectively. in both Finland, Germany the marriage case per thousand people were 6 however, it was decreased in in 1994 to almost five thousand.in 1981 the marriage statistics in Denmark were just more than 4000 , and increased to almost 7 thousand people in 1994.
Moving further in next bar chart, similarly in both marriage, and divorce statistics had been noticed. the divorce cases in people of Japan, Germany were 1.5 , and 2 thousand people respectively. either of Finland, and Denmark crossed the statistics above 2 thousand people. in Germany the statistics remained same at 2000. the divorce statistics in Italy were almost negligible.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, moreover, similarly, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1035.0 965.302439024 107% => OK
No of words: 199.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20100502513 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85382004845 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527638190955 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 306.9 283.868780488 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 9.0 0.482926829268 1864% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 56.6335180957 43.030603864 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0909090909 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0909090909 22.9334400587 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.54545454545 5.23603664747 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 1.69756097561 707% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289779706055 0.215688989381 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104577836854 0.103423049105 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.066880468626 0.0843802449381 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162810557183 0.15604864568 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0444897379659 0.0819641961636 54% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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