The chart below shows the amount spent on six consumer goods in four European countries.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The bar graph illustrates, the expenditure of six consumer goods in four different country's such as France, Italy, Britain and Germany .Units are measured in pound sterling.
Overall, the national expense of all the given products was highest in Britain as compared to other countries. In terms of tennis rackets and personal sterios has least amount spent by all the given country's.
With regards to the photographic film makes up national expense high in Britain by 170 which is five times higher than France, whereas, italy and germany comprise of 155 and 150 respectively. Similarly, the next expensive item was toys which is more than 160 by britain, while, france and italy consist of same amount such as, over 155. Germany spent a small amount for toys among other country's mere 145.
On the other hand, Cd's and perfumes has above 160 thousands budget in Britain, however France spent more money on CDs (above 155) than perfumes (below 150) in contrast to Italy which is less than five in perfumes with 155. Furthermore, Britain has same amount for tennis rackets and sterios with 155, whilst Italy spent only for tennis rackets same amount which is five thousand pound higher than sterios.The amount of money spent by France and Germany is lower than 150 on ach items.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...goods in four different countrys such as France, Italy, Britain and Germany .Unit...
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...h as France, Italy, Britain and Germany .Units are measured in pound sterling. ...
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...as France, Italy, Britain and Germany .Units are measured in pound sterling. Over...
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... of tennis rackets and personal sterios has least amount spent by all the given countrys....
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...than France, whereas, italy and germany comprise of 155 and 150 respectively. Similarly, th...
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...on CDs above 155 than perfumes below 150 in contrast to Italy which is less than ...
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...with 155. Furthermore, Britain has same amount for tennis rackets and sterios with 155...
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...five thousand pound higher than sterios.The amount of money spent by France and Ge...
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...han sterios.The amount of money spent by France and Germany is lower than 150 on ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, similarly, so, whereas, while, as to, in contrast, such as, in contrast to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1066.0 965.302439024 110% => OK
No of words: 216.0 196.424390244 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93518518519 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3440926247 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509259259259 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 313.2 283.868780488 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.4439531199 43.030603864 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.25 112.824112599 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 22.9334400587 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.875 5.23603664747 284% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133673809697 0.215688989381 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0639283746293 0.103423049105 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0410932246086 0.0843802449381 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.083917793502 0.15604864568 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0246911172869 0.0819641961636 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 61.2550243902 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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