The map below is of the town of Garlsdon. A new supermarket (S) is planned for the town. The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket.
A schematic geographical map of GARLSDON is shown in picture. Two possible sites is identified as a supermarket, which one of them locate nearly in center of town and other participate out of the city. There are many advantages and disadvantages of both. But it is very important to select a place due to customer’s need, such as availability, traffic problem and …. . In addition supplier demand should be considered too
Availability of a market is known as an important factor for all people. This factor is comprise of different variable like, traffic problem, bus general transport means, nearing and so other. Site S2 is located in the center of city and in a no traffic zone that make it more attractive than other site for people in addition accessibility of this site to rail way is also adequate and this fact make these site appropriate for countryside people. In other site S2 in comprise to S1 is nearer to two great city Brandon and Cranston with on the whole 44000 population, so make super market popular and create more benefit. Therefore According to clients’ needs and supplier benefits, site S2, is more useful and acceptable rather than S1.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 373, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...as availability, traffic problem and …. . In addition supplier demand should be c...
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Line 1, column 378, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...ailability, traffic problem and …. . In addition supplier demand should be considered to...
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Line 2, column 89, Rule ID: COMPRISE_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'comprise' or 'consist of'?
Suggestion: comprise; consist of
...t factor for all people. This factor is comprise of different variable like, traffic proble...
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Line 2, column 624, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...market popular and create more benefit. Therefore According to clients' needs and su...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, in addition, such as, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 977.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 199.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90954773869 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95411154156 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 106.607317073 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623115577889 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 318.6 283.868780488 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.544530687 43.030603864 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.555555556 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1111111111 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.11111111111 5.23603664747 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20299880268 0.215688989381 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0703380890139 0.103423049105 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0753698151909 0.0843802449381 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155260777003 0.15604864568 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0404864412836 0.0819641961636 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.