Some people think cars are a better way of transportation around the city, while others prefer cycling. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
As per the recent report by Harvard Business School, a person spend approximately 5000 dollars every years on transportation. Some people have an opinion that four-wheelers are the best mode of commutation with cities, while others are in favor of using cycles. Before we reach to any confusion, it is imperative that we shall put some light on both the views.
Many people choose cars as the mode of transport in city because it's convenient features. This is to say that cars, nowadays, are equipped with many features such as air conditioner and music system. These features provide the comfortable and entertaining travel experience for the travellers. In addition, cars also provide better safety equipments such as airbags, which is very helpful at the time of accident to safeguard the people inside the car. For instance, Google's driverless car is already prebooked by 1 million orders because of its claim to be the most comfortable and safest vehicle.
On the other hand, there are people who are inclined towards the use of cycle because it help them to avoid traffic problems in the city. This is because a cycle occupy very less space on the road. A person can easily pass through the heavily congested road and reach their destination on time. As per the report published in 2017 by Hindustan Times newspaper, it is found that the cities which encouraged their citizens to use cycles were able to reduce traffic problems by 37%.
To conclude, despite the fact that cars provide comfortable and safe journey, in my opinion cycles are better mode of transportation because it help to reduce the traffic congestion problem which is currently one the major issues around the globe. I myself use cycle to commute to my office because I can avoid traffic jam and also it contributes toward pollution free environment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, while, for instance, in addition, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1527.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97394136808 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7100350782 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579804560261 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.0584654213 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.071428571 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9285714286 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160286371628 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0508511992556 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0583814013599 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0919890849194 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0332021661123 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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