Some people prefer to work on school projects with a group, while others would rather work alone.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
It is favoured by some students to work in a team for a school project. Meanwhile, others hold a belief of working alone. I, However, agree with the former view and will discuss both sides of the argument in the following paragraphs.
On the one hand, students working in a team performed admirably than those working single. When they work together, they get several ideas due to more number of masterminds involved. For instance, if 5 students are brainstorming together then each one will suggest at least 2-3 different approaches so that a desirable design can be developed. As a result, due to diverse thought processes, better inputs and great output can be attained.
Furthermore, Students work collaboratively to enhance teamwork skills. Jobs, nowadays, demand employers with excellent teamwork qualities. For example, teamwork is one of the most critical requirements mentioned by prominent companies. Consequently, in order to get a decent job, parents advice their children to involve in assignments having a team. Thus, working in a team is more important for many scholars to be successful in project and jobs as well.
On the other hand, many students are more comfortable working as a single entity for a project. Due to their shyness or not able to cope up with other students, they are more at ease when working alone. For example, it is more challenging for an introvert to share his views with others compared to an extrovert. Thus, they prefer to work on assignment alone with their own ideas. Moreover, many teenagers demand full credit for the completion of a task. They unlikely desire to share their success with anyone, which results in jealousy within them. Hence, many students opt to work alone.
In conclusion, I believe, it is more beneficial for students skill set to work in a team, while prefer to work in isolation to get higher results. Having said that, parents and teacher should involve students in collaborative activities to enhance their overall growth in the future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...enhance teamwork skills. Jobs, nowadays, demand employers with excellent teamwork...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, so, then, thus, well, while, at least, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1686.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06306306306 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81717856261 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558558558559 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.3007704232 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.2857142857 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8571428571 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262724462831 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0905115444103 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0770831545522 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170101873542 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103467501983 0.056905535591 182% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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