Who influence more, family or friends?
Humans acquaint numerous people through their life and they can effect on or be affected. When it comes to the position whether family has more influence or friends, there are controversial opinion. As far as I am concerned, nowadays people receive further and profound impacts from their friends and in friendly atmospheres.
The most effective factor that causes people being affected by their friends is enviousness. Consider a child during his development, child spend much time with their counterparts instead of being with family and enviousness is so obvious between children because they tend to imitate each other’s’ behaviors whether these behaviors are positive or negative from parent point of view. For instance, we can observe that when children are collectively playing with toys, they usually tend to play with the same at the same time and sometimes they fight on that.
In the adolescent stages, juveniles are still envying to their peers but they do not like to be loser from their counterpart point of view. In fact, they behave based on their counterpart like a chess game. For instance, they change their clothes due to attracting more attention, attending to forbidden place to illustrate they are growing up, changing their accent and attempt to utter sentences to distinguish their self. Therefore, they are receiving substantial effects form their peers while they do not aware of that.
What’s more, at the adulthood stage, adults usually compete to obtain further welfare and well-being between their peers. This process is similar to adolescence but there is a difference that at this stage adult voluntarily receives their peers’ effects and is in the position to choose them while adolescences receive them involuntarily. Therefore, adults can utilize their peers’ influences in their favor to enhance their life.
To sum up, nowadays family roles are disappearing between children and people tend to spend their time with their friends then due to that we receive further influence from our friend through our entire life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, still, then, therefore, well, while, for instance, in fact, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1765.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 329.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36474164134 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79511998736 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.54103343465 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.8420372592 48.9658058833 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.071428571 100.406767564 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.6045352989 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85714285714 5.45110844103 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134471054739 0.236089414692 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0615679510778 0.076458572812 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0809766165869 0.0737576698707 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108817593679 0.150856017488 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0865301217116 0.0645574589148 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 11.7677419355 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 10.9000537634 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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