The diagrams below show the life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth.
Lifecycle of silkworm has been illustrated in figure and in continue the manner of silk cloth production is described schematically. During a 10 days interval form and a larva is matured and formed to Silkworm.
At first a mature silkworm egg on a mulberry leaf and after 10 days larva go out of its egg and start nourishing of mulberry leaf until 4-6 weeks. With full growing of larva has been threaded the silk around own by 3-8 days until a cocoon is formed which larva is prisoned in that. After that 16 day need to maturity process has been completed and a moth try to get out of its envelope. This new moth by 10 das has altered to a new silkworm who can produce egg and make this circle alive.
But for production of silk cloth it is important to collect cocoon before full maturity of larva. So that selected cocoon spill on boiling water until larva die of this heat, why it is necessary to kill larva before they could disturb the cocoon. Any cocoon could be produced 300-900 m thread averagely. After twisting threads is dyed and so weaved for consuming and marketing.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 379, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... so weaved for consuming and marketing.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 887.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 197.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.50253807107 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4464793379 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568527918782 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 270.0 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.5901945074 43.030603864 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.7 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.8 5.23603664747 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113171916471 0.215688989381 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0552314019586 0.103423049105 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0743853747723 0.0843802449381 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100241181044 0.15604864568 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0654120478564 0.0819641961636 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.2329268293 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.82 11.4140731707 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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