Over the past two years, the number of shoppers in Central Plaza has been steadily decreasing while the popularity of skateboarding has increased dramatically. Many Central Plaza store owners believe that the decrease in their business is due to the number of skateboard users in the plaza. There has also been a dramatic increase in the amount of litter and vandalism throughout the plaza. Thus, we recommend that the city prohibit skateboarding in Central Plaza. If skateboarding is prohibited here, we predict that business in Central Plaza will return to its previously high levels.
First of all, there is no relation between central plaza and skateboarding. Skateboarding is mainly built up an open place because it needs a vast open area for skating. On the other hand, we can easily understand that central plaza is not placed in vacant land rather in a building. There have many shops, bars, hotel facilities, food corner and others. It might be true that there also have many recreational facilities. Most of them are indoors like swimming, indoor game facilities and others. Sometimes they provide some outdoor recreations which are required and completed in small place like outdoor swimming pool etc.
Most importantly, given facilities by central plaza and skateboarding is a totally different issue. For example, one man can like skating but it is not affecting him to go to bars, shops, swimming, hotels, store etc. if he wants. All are important and necessary for human’s life. So, it’s really a valueless complaint. If any central plaza is provided skateboarding facilities, then I think it’s a great opportunity to sell other related products. Then why will be decreasing central plaza’s business for the popularity of the skateboarding?
Another focusing point is increased litter and vandalism throughout the plaza. It’s a normal thought that if the movements of people are decreasing somewhere, this place might have been clean. So, the store owner’s opinion is not true logically. Litter and vandalism is depending on the density of population in a particular place. On the other hand, if they said skating area is not cleaned, that would be trustworthy.
It is true that central plaza business is decreasing day by day while skateboarding popularity is increased. But there is no logical evidence that for skateboarding, central plaza business goes downward. If they want to back their position, I think it’s mandatory to study that actually for what reason, shop owners couldn’t capture the public attention. They should have a clear cut concept on it and should take action on the basis of their lacking’s. They might change their business strategy if necessary.
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 2.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 22 15
No. of Words: 343 350
No. of Characters: 1712 1500
No. of Different Words: 190 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.304 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.991 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.739 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 117 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 94 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 64 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 46 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 15.591 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.622 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.636 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.282 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.451 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.074 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 626, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ll place like outdoor swimming pool etc. Most importantly, given facilities by ce...
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Line 3, column 563, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...or the popularity of the skateboarding? Another focusing point is increased litt...
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Line 5, column 278, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...ot true logically. Litter and vandalism is depending on the density of population in a parti...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, if, really, so, then, while, for example, i think, first of all, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.6327345309 112% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.9520958084 69% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 11.1786427146 98% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 13.6137724551 59% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 28.8173652695 101% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 55.5748502994 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 16.3942115768 30% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1813.0 2260.96107784 80% => OK
No of words: 342.0 441.139720559 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30116959064 5.12650576532 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.56307096286 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00914131139 2.78398813304 108% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 204.123752495 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552631578947 0.468620217663 118% => OK
syllable_count: 555.3 705.55239521 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.96107784431 161% => OK
Article: 1.0 8.76447105788 11% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.70958083832 148% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 19.7664670659 121% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.8473053892 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.7483321959 57.8364921388 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 75.5416666667 119.503703932 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.25 23.324526521 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.08333333333 5.70786347227 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.25449101796 57% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.20758483034 183% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 6.88822355289 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.67664670659 107% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270762767574 0.218282227539 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0762380889327 0.0743258471296 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0892491295334 0.0701772020484 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16506691449 0.128457276422 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0574696146514 0.0628817314937 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 14.3799401198 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 48.3550499002 118% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 12.197005988 72% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 12.5979740519 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.32208582834 99% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 98.500998004 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 12.3882235529 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 11.1389221557 68% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.9071856287 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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