You are due to move into a rented apartment next month but you will not be able to because you have some problems.
Write a letter to the course provider. In your letter.
1-Explain your situation
2-Describe your problems
3-Tell him/her when you think you can move in
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to inform you that I will be unable to shift to the flat in August 2018 as per the rent contract with your company.
Currently, I live in one-bed room flat nearby your building, and its size does not meet my family requirement. When I read your advert on the website for the availability of two-bed rooms apartment, I made a spontaneous decision to book it. The contract is signed, and the shifting is scheduled to be in August.
I have signed a contract for a fully furnished flat, and it should be ready with full arrangement. However, I realized that some repair works are still outstanding. Certain kitchen appliances are not available which are mandatory for my family. Therefore, my family and I will not shift till all arrangement are fixed.
A List for the missing devices and repair works are attached for your reference. I would therefore suggest that you arrange the deliver all of these before my shifting to the flat, and that you ensure all outstanding works are completed. It is the important to stick to the contract before commencing with the rental period.
I look forward to receiving your feedback.
Yours faithfully,
Ayoub
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 47, Rule ID: YOUR[1]
Message: Did you mean 'you're' or 'you are'?
Suggestion: you're; you are
...tly, I live in one-bed room flat nearby your building, and its size does not meet my...
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Line 9, column 125, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ould therefore suggest that you arrange the deliver all of these before my shifting to the ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, so, still, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 996.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 205.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85853658537 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72120804611 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590243902439 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 301.5 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0957500875 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.6153846154 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7692307692 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197018772542 0.216113520407 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0653772611576 0.0766984524023 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0579719869204 0.0603063233224 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113919137043 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0598191902059 0.0580467560999 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.