Blood sports have become a hot topic for debate in recent years. As society develops it is increasingly seen as an uncivilized activity and cruel to the helpless animals that are killed. Blood sports should be banned. to what extent do you agree or disagree?
Blood sports is a kind of sport which includes animal versus animal fights and man vs animal fights. Developed society defines it as a savage activity; it should be banned or not? This is the most contentious issue of recent years. This essay will illustrate the related aspects of blood sports and my personal opinion will be concluded by the end.
This type of dreadful games have been in practice since many generations. Usually, people play or encourage the games for adrenaline, which they get while watching blood games. Moreover, the owner of winning animal wins money which acts as alluring factor for participants. For example, In developing countries or illegally in developed countries people bet on their animals in order to get winning prize.
However, performing blood games is in human activity. It not only leaves the defeated animal in excruciating pain but also causes death sometimes. In addition to this, such games set wrong examples for the coming generation, and leads to barbarism in the behaviour of young children. To save the extinct species, non -profitable organisations should bring this topic in limelight. For instance, recent survey conducted by "The Tribune" in India, states that many campaigns helped in saving animals from such merciless games by disclosing the dark side of such games.
In the nutshell, since these games are of no benefits to our society as well as to our environment; thus, blood games should be prohibited and it can only be possible by the combined efforts of both public and government authorities.
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Suggestion: opinion
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, moreover, so, thus, well, while, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1322.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1640625 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75176390518 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6171875 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.9166304511 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.4285714286 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2857142857 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239950586362 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0785684356405 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.048907265112 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142466262007 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0763621987444 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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