Blood sports have become a hot topic for debate in recent years. As society develops it is increasingly seen as an uncivilized activity and cruel to the helpless animals that are killed. All blood sports should be banned.
Discuss the main arguments for this statement and give your own opinion.
Blood sport is very gruesome activity to kill innocent animals just for an entertainment and thrilling purpose. Ideal society definitely criticize and deny this sport. However I totally agree that sports which include killing activity should be banned.
To embark on, in the justification of my notion, most of the time animals are more kind and harmless. Killing them will not make us empowered living being. This encourage to negativity and futile dominance into the society, there might be a chance that people started to kill each other just for sporting purpose. It imbalance stability between humanity. hence this kind of cruel sport should get banned and vanished from each every county. People should learn to love any living thing which include animals, plants and obviously humans because hurting or killing others will not lead to empowerment and enjoyment but it provokes pain and hatred feeling.
However, some people might gets schadenfreude by hurting animals or it entertains other people also to watch. In our past eras people used to have colossal activity to brutally execute animals. Some religious community also think that this is devoted act for god. Even nowadays people are having challenges on dark web to kill specific rare species and post them on internet
In a nutshell, Even-though in past era people used to get fun out of it but it is clearly understandable that this blood sport is hurting living being which is not fit into ideal and educated society. Instead people should help animals and love them because sometime they can be more human than us.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1338.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10687022901 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48938074446 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610687022901 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.6924055979 49.4020404114 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5714285714 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7142857143 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203601084624 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0754235530099 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0675769549971 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144909500532 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0927843362577 0.056905535591 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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