Pie chart
The two pie charts illustrate the change of different sourses of revenues generated online by Major Category in the years 1995 and
At first glance it was clear that householders spent high proportion of their income on Housing and Food, while Transportation and Education were received the lowest expenditures in both years.
As can be seen from the grap, it is evident that Food accounted for 11% of household expenditures in 1950 and experienced a more than threefold increased in 2010. At the beginning of the period, Transportation and Other made up 3% and 4% of the revenues generated online, respectively, and these figures dramatically fell to 14% and 19% in the years later.
Housing, which comprised over seven- tenths proportion of the chart in 1950, decreased substantially to almost one fifth after 60 years. In constrast, the figures of both Heath care and Education remained constant in the range of 9%-11% during this period.
- It is not necessary to travel to other places to learn the culture of other people. We can learn just as much from books, films and the internet. Do you agree or disagree? 73
- It is generally discussed among the public that extreme sports such as skydiving and rock-climbing should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 84
- Some people believe that the age limit for the drivers should be increased [Measure - M] to ensure road safety [Purpose - P].To what extent do you agree or disagree? 67
- Nowadays, more and more older people who need employment compete with the younger people for the same jobs. What problems this causes? What are solutions? 56
- Pie chart 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... by Major Category in the years 1995 and At first glance it was clear that househ...
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...e range of 9%-11% during this period.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 796.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 155.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13548387097 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96699850436 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.690322580645 0.547539520022 126% => OK
syllable_count: 232.2 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 22.4926829268 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.7655746267 43.030603864 171% => OK
Chars per sentence: 159.2 112.824112599 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.0 22.9334400587 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129648206991 0.215688989381 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0543162378824 0.103423049105 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0699638216588 0.0843802449381 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0887199651212 0.15604864568 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114116706251 0.0819641961636 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 13.2329268293 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 61.2550243902 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.3012195122 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.5 11.4329268293 179% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.9970731707 131% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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