Today large shopping center and supermarkets are more common than small local shops. Is this a negative or positive development?
In recent years, customers are more interested in modern shopping malls and supermarkets than local stores. While this trend has some benefits, it brings a negative impact on individual business that requires serious consideration.
To begin with, the growing of shopping centers and supermarkets offers a merits. Since these places are usually complexes which gather retailers and sellers in one area, it is more convenient for the customers to browse items without having to travel from store to store in far distance. For example, unlike convention stores where people travel from one town to another to buy different types of products, shoppers can simply switch to a television shop from a food and grocery kiosk nearby in the malls. Moreover, these state-of-the-art markets give companies great opportunities to easily advertise and promote themselves to the massive crowd at one time. Thus, it drastically facilitates the manufacturers’ sales.
However, there is a major problem when large malls and modern markets keep attracting the citizens’ attention. Many individual businesses could be closed due to the lack of customers and decrease of sales. Since the small shops cannot compete effectively, they will not gain enough profit to pay all the expense and keep their store running. Consequently, after these vendors decide to stop opening, there will be a huge number of jobless employees that governments and the society need to deal with. In Vietnam, there were reportedly 30 percent of local stores shut down in 2012 and over 3 million workers ceased to have an occupation at the time.
In conclusion, while delivering new shopping centers and supermarkets seems to have several benefits, this tendency is creating hardship to smaller stores and an enormous issue to the society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 72, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a merit' or simply 'merits'?
Suggestion: a merit; merits
...hopping centers and supermarkets offers a merits. Since these places are usually complex...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, however, if, moreover, so, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1529.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3649122807 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94767333427 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649122807018 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6618650206 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.615384615 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9230769231 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.30769230769 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179742437823 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0603397834519 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0696454937061 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120457626971 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0657256990675 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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