a person who knowingly commits a crime has broken the social contract and should not retain aNy civil rights or the right to benefit from his or her own labor
I do not totally agree that a person who knowingly commits a crime has broken the social contract and should not retain nay civil rights or the right to benefit from his or her own labor.
Although a person that has knowingly commited a crime has broken the social contract, it does not neccessarily mean such an individual's civil rights or right to benefit from his or her own labor should be abrogated. By proscribing the civil liberties of such an individual, the society has also descended into the pit bog of infamy of demanding an eye for an eye. Instead there is a need to be better, there are better ways of extracting every ounce of penitence and contrition from such an individual without nullifing his or her civil liberties or the right to benefit from his or her labour.
To be factual and to draw verisimilitude from the present judicial system of most countries, a person that has knowingly commited a crime is not guilty until proven otherwise in a competent court of allow. And whilst the case is still being judged, such an individual retain the civil right to be represented by a lawyer or self representation as he or she wishes.
This has shown that even contemporary judicial system does allow criminals a scintilla of civil right. However, it does not end there. Due to the fickle nature of man, I feel that even while incarcerated, criminals should be allowed to explore ways of being productive, giving back to the system which they have tried to rip apart and eventually benefit from their own labor. Again, this scenario is evident in the present correctional systems in place in most countries of the world.
Great care has to be taken when it comes to requisite punishment for crime perpetuated by an individual. Such barbarian acts like jungle justice, an eye for an eye and other forms of extra judicial or martial acts should be eschewed.
Reason for this view has to do with the need to give such an individual an opportunity to advance why he or she has commited such acts, the type of preparations that was undertook etcetra. These information will allow the society to be better prepared to forestall recurrence and reduce its susceptibility to such. Jungle justice, extra-judicial maltreatment, torture etcetra - which are some form of proscription of civil rights, should have no place in the Correctional/Penitentiary system.
In the words of Friedrich Nietzsche - he who fights a monster should take care not to become a monster and when you look long into an abyss , the abyss looks back at you. We can not fight mendacity with mendacity, we have to do better.
Conclusively, knowingly commiting a crime should not neccessarily equate to having forgone all civil rights and the right to benefit from the fruit of one's labor.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an individual' or simply 'individuals'?
Suggestion: an individual; individuals
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Line 3, column 365, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Instead,
... infamy of demanding an eye for an eye. Instead there is a need to be better, there are...
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Line 11, column 171, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'undertaken'.
Suggestion: undertaken
...acts, the type of preparations that was undertook etcetra. These information will allow t...
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Line 11, column 190, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this information' or 'These informations'?
Suggestion: This information; These informations
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ter and when you look long into an abyss , the abyss looks back at you. We can not...
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Line 14, column 152, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
... the right to benefit from the fruit of ones labor.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, so, still, while, as to, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 33.0505617978 106% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 58.6224719101 109% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2308.0 2235.4752809 103% => OK
No of words: 476.0 442.535393258 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8487394958 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67091256922 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91686851155 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 215.323595506 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.481092436975 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 723.6 704.065955056 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.1087869134 60.3974514979 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.222222222 118.986275619 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4444444444 23.4991977007 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.11111111111 5.21951772744 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.97078651685 161% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.420406235009 0.243740707755 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150339692409 0.0831039109588 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.226537001498 0.0758088955206 299% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.25228565605 0.150359130593 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.257328864765 0.0667264976115 386% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 14.1392134831 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 48.8420337079 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 100.480337079 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.8971910112 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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