The chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.
The bar graph illustrates, the information of free time in a week for different employment categories such as, full time and part time workers, unemployed, housewives, and retired persons in either genders between 1998 and 1999.
Overall, unemployed and retired personal has enjoying most significant leisure time in a week over the period given. While, female full time workers account for least amount of extra time. Generally speaking, males makes up leisure time relatively more than females.
Initially, unemployed and retired males consist of highest amount of free time in a week as compared to female such as, approximately more than 80 hours and about 79 hours respectively. Similarly, full time employed males comprise of near 43 hours in a week for enjoyment which is just over 5 hours than females with 43 hours in a week.
Regarding part time employed females enjoyment in extra time was lesser than housewives. As is observed, housewives found time for enjoyment in a week with 50 hours, while, part time employed females has mere 40 hours in week. Moreover, part time employed males not mentioned in the figure over the period.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 112, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...ifferent employment categories such as, full time and part time workers, unemployed, hous...
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Line 1, column 126, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...yment categories such as, full time and part time workers, unemployed, housewives, and re...
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Line 3, column 132, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...ek over the period given. While, female full time workers account for least amount of ext...
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Line 5, column 49, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the highest'.
Suggestion: of the highest
...y, unemployed and retired males consist of highest amount of free time in a week as compar...
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Line 5, column 144, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... female such as, approximately more than 80 hours and about 79 hours respectively...
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Line 5, column 199, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...about 79 hours respectively. Similarly, full time employed males comprise of near 43 hour...
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Line 5, column 224, Rule ID: COMPRISE_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'comprise' or 'consist of'?
Suggestion: comprise; consist of
...ly. Similarly, full time employed males comprise of near 43 hours in a week for enjoyment w...
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Line 7, column 11, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
... with 43 hours in a week. Regarding part time employed females enjoyment in extra tim...
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Line 7, column 173, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...njoyment in a week with 50 hours, while, part time employed females has mere 40 h...
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Line 7, column 175, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...oyment in a week with 50 hours, while, part time employed females has mere 40 hours in w...
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Line 7, column 239, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...es has mere 40 hours in week. Moreover, part time employed males not mentioned in the fig...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, regarding, similarly, so, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 964.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 188.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12765957447 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70856997144 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526595744681 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 296.1 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.5351971298 43.030603864 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.111111111 112.824112599 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8888888889 22.9334400587 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 1.69756097561 648% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192527927339 0.215688989381 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103713110134 0.103423049105 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0354965435682 0.0843802449381 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141055423982 0.15604864568 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0365015400539 0.0819641961636 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.2329268293 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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