Most leaders or directors generally belong to an older age group, but some people believe that young leaders are better.to what extend do you agree or dis agree.give your opinion.
It is often argued that guiding or directing head should be the youthful people because, many of the higher position holders are elders. In my opinion, while I believe that old age leaders are more experienced in practical ways, I strongly agree that young chiefs are better than the old age controller. This essay will explain the benefit of youngsters on the leading position.
Firstly, energetic both physically and mentally have been the virtual factor of a leader. Mercurial nature of a leader would make his co-workers to be cheerful and thereby power and growth will increase dramatically. Moreover, young people are always updated by modern technical as well as a digital world, so that it should be viewed on their success. For instance, fresh government of Canada has most of the leaders are youngsters, which makes an admirable growth of that country in all sectors.
Retirement is an essential matter in every field. In other words, to give an opportunity to young members would help the older persons to take a rest, and they have relief from the stress full management problems. That may lead to be younger to prove their sustainable development in certain areas. Furthermore, age is not a barrier to become a successful boss or chief. It has included skills in management as well as critical thinking. Have a position in an authorized zone, a younger leader can make such a category in higher level. For example, Zuckerberg is a CEO of Facebook, lead that company in world-famous social media.
To conclude, a skill full leadership is based on an internal ability of a human that is not valued by age, nevertheless, wholehearted young leaders often make assistance to be more dynamic and forward thinking. So that its obvious as long as youth director has the efficacy to lead an organization.
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Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'firstly', 'furthermore', 'may', 'moreover', 'nevertheless', 'so', 'well', 'while', 'for example', 'for instance', 'as well as', 'in my opinion', 'in other words']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.233727810651 0.247107183377 95% => OK
Verbs: 0.14201183432 0.155533422707 91% => OK
Adjectives: 0.136094674556 0.0946595960268 144% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0562130177515 0.0501214627716 112% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0325443786982 0.0437548338989 74% => OK
Prepositions: 0.115384615385 0.122226691241 94% => OK
Participles: 0.0266272189349 0.0403226058552 66% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.80988388734 2.80594681477 100% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0295857988166 0.0326793684256 91% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.103550295858 0.0861772015684 120% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0236686390533 0.021408717616 111% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00591715976331 0.011925033212 50% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1829.0 1933.35771543 95% => OK
No of words: 305.0 316.048096192 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.99672131148 6.12580529183 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20517956788 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.386885245902 0.374742101984 103% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.27868852459 0.28420135186 98% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.190163934426 0.203846283523 93% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.127868852459 0.137316102897 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80988388734 2.80594681477 100% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.037074148 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596721311475 0.56093040696 106% => OK
Word variations: 66.1961598923 60.7387585426 109% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0891783567 99% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0625 20.7743622355 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.725687531 49.517814964 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.3125 127.492653851 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0625 20.7743622355 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.875 0.814263465372 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 3.99599198397 125% => OK
Readability: 46.931352459 49.1944974215 95% => OK
Elegance: 1.62820512821 1.69124875643 96% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233292902894 0.332605444948 70% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0699897567195 0.102741220458 68% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0406360359138 0.0668466124924 61% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.477783129876 0.534860350844 89% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.125146357789 0.148594505496 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0769264241392 0.134430193775 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.066178624698 0.0742795772207 89% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.269970783885 0.324371583561 83% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0312702940254 0.0638462369009 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151301585586 0.228012699653 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0320794809478 0.058150111329 55% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.68436873747 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.41683366733 88% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 5.90881763527 118% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.5751503006 78% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 10.4468937876 96% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.