Scientific research should be carried out and controlled by the government, rather than the private companies. To what extend do you agree or dis agree?
Privatization has been escalating rapidly in many fields including science and technology. However, many people argued that scientific research and progress must be under the control of government officials never endorse to any personal companies. In this essay disagree to privatize technical studies and growths because, government authority should be follow up the progress and keep credential confidentially.
On the one hand, scientist and experts maintain innovative researches and studies strictly reliable manner. Most of the researches must be proper controlled by many officials before publishing to the world.So that, every results must be keep in secret before getting approval from the allotted government personal which makes the outcome remained pure and clear. For instance, NASA keeps their studies under protection to prevent the entry of terrorist and extremist involvement by authorized security advancement. Moreover, Nations growth emphasize to the ingenious discoveries and emerging scientific developments. Mostly private companies delegates from various nationalities and researches must be distributed to many would makes conflicts in some extend for the confer and credits.
On the other hand, private companies are working under capitalization and proprietors. Perhaps, such personal concentrate mostly to the money matters than the improvement or progression of research country. By the influence of bribe and agreement gimmick would attack the products of scientific research in some extend and that may lead to the failure of outcome. Furthermore, employment opportunities of inhabitants may dropped off by the privatization of research institutes such as, foreign employees and officials. Not to be out done,government could offer jobs to the citizen as per the order of written and oral exams for predominant scientific institutes.
To conclude, sailing every field including technical research institutes and services to the prominent personal companies would alter the stability of nation and by products. There by government officials must be carried and follow up such centers for the national development and well being of research outcomes.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 355, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'followed'?
Suggestion: followed
...because, government authority should be follow up the progress and keep credential con...
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Suggestion: So
...fficials before publishing to the world.So that, every results must be keep in sec...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...under protection to prevent the entry of terrorist and extremist involvement by a...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...thorized security advancement. Moreover, Nations growth emphasize to the ingeniou...
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Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'make'
Suggestion: make
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Message: Did you mean 'extent' ("extent" is a noun, "extend" is a verb)?
Suggestion: extent
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Message: Did you mean 'extent' ("extent" is a noun, "extend" is a verb)?
Suggestion: extent
...products of scientific research in some extend and that may lead to the failure of out...
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Suggestion: , government
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, well, for instance, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1875.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.89622641509 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10175933315 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575471698113 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 569.7 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4565061379 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.0 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206971350067 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0685104071564 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0384250099544 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130947306735 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.026697960519 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.94 12.4159519038 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.24 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.