Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Sports, nowadays, have become more and more popular, and many people decide to have a career in sports like becoming a sport professional. It has been argued that sports celebrities should receive a great deal of money while some people claim that it is not fair for those of doctors, teachers, lawyers or engineers. I would discuss both opinions and provide my persional view afterward.
On the one hand, some people believe that successful sports professionals deserve to receive enormous salaries since they have to spend much time from a very young age while sports-related jobs are short-term employment in comparison to other occupations. To specify this argument, professional athletes spend their childhood and adolescence training to junior competitions, come successful in 20 seconds. According to a statistic, the average amount of working time for one professional athlete is only 5-6 years. Furthermore, a sports-related job is considered the most risk of injury which may end their sports careers at a very young age.
On the other hand, other professionals earn much less than sports athletes, even though they have to study lots and they play vital roles in the society. For instances, doctors and medical researchers put at least ten years to study and training, and they are essential to humanity and save the life for all people even for athletes. Engineers studied around eight years and invented many pieces of equipments that we use day-by-day. Other examples include construction workers and farmers who made home and food to keep us alive. All of these occupations do not earn millions of dollars as many sports stars do, so it seems to be unfair for them.
In my opinion, I agree that professional athletes deserve to have high payment because of their dedications, injury risks, and short-term jobs, but the government should have suitable wage policy such that all occupations satisfy with their salary.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, may, second, so, while, at least, for instance, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1626.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17834394904 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85523008482 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62101910828 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.7978904582 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.076923077 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1538461538 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.84615384615 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251761611864 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0816009724896 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589760653449 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138067303773 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0776807567296 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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