You are studying for a qualification, and you would like some time off work to complete it.Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:Ask for some time off to complete a qualification.Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off.Say how
Dear Manager,
Hope you are keeping well.
I wish to inform you that I am pursuing Masters in Administration course from IIM which is one of the most prestigious institutes in the country. I have completed 3 semesters and will be appearing for the fourth semester qualification examinations in the next month.
I need a few days off work from 11th Aug to 15th Aug in order to complete my qualification. Please approve my leave for the mentioned period so that i can prepare for the exams.
I shall complete the tasks assigned to me before my study leave. I shall be able to take up additional work post qualification since it would enable me to gain more insight about the role of my work. I shall make up for the loss during my absence by filling in for my teammates.
I look forward to a positive response from you.
Thank you.
Yours sincerely,
Amber
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 185, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
.... I have completed 3 semesters and will be appearing for the fourth semester qualification e...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ion examinations in the next month. I need a few days off work from 11th Aug ...
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Line 8, column 150, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... leave for the mentioned period so that i can prepare for the exams. I shall c...
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Line 10, column 201, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...more insight about the role of my work. I shall make up for the loss during my ab...
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Line 12, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ence by filling in for my teammates. I look forward to a positive response fro...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 722.0 937.175257732 77% => OK
No of words: 155.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65806451613 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80386235766 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.670967741935 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 222.3 290.88556701 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2207892077 44.8134815571 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.2 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.8 4.34317383033 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259899955514 0.216113520407 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0975859342587 0.0766984524023 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0429460263967 0.0603063233224 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118964850615 0.12726935374 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0213462999141 0.0580467560999 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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