Parents should be held legally responsible for the children’s act what is your opinion.
From our childhood whatever we learn from our parents and by observing our surroundings. It is a highly debatable issue that parents should be held responsible for children’s activities or not. Some people believe that parents are the only who responsible for the children’s activities while some ignore this notion. In this essay, I will deliver necessary arguments before jumping to conclusion.
To begin with the positive side, Parents are the first mentor of the children. Parenting plays a focal role in children’s upbringing. In addition, children absorb and imitate from his parent and surrounding. Further, they spend most of the time at home and learn the language, culture, rituals, and many more things so if parents following good practices so children will follow the same automatically by observing them.
Another pivotal aspect of my stance is, responsible parenting not only encompasses taking care of the children but also making him accountable for his mistakes and learning discipline. For example, in one of the interview, famous celebrity Mr. Jacky Chan confessed that he is a failure as a father for his son’s drug addiction and expresses the regret of the public.
To sum up, with the aforementioned points, one can conclude that the parent is solely and legally responsible for the children’s act.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2020-01-22 | jashan randhawa | 72 | view |
| 2020-01-09 | manraj123 | 77 | view |
| 2019-10-24 | Deepkaur123 | 80 | view |
| 2019-10-24 | Navjotkaur56 | 77 | view |
| 2019-08-21 | khehra mandeep | 80 | view |
- What are the benefits of living in big cities as opposed to rural areas What are the problems of rural areas and how can they be solved 67
- Whether the design of the building will have a positive or negative impact on people’s life and work? 77
- What do you see as the main advantages and disadvantages of undertaking studies in a foreign country? 80
- In a cashless society, people use more credit cards. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this phenomenon? 90
- Parents should be held legally responsible for children’s activities. What is your opinion? 77
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 246, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a responsible'.
Suggestion: who is a responsible
...eople believe that parents are the only who responsible for the children's activities whil...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 174, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to discipline'
Suggestion: to discipline
...countable for his mistakes and learning discipline. For example, in one of the interview, ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 224, Rule ID: FAMOUS_CELEBRITY[1]
Message: Use simply 'celebrity'.
Suggestion: celebrity
.... For example, in one of the interview, famous celebrity Mr. Jacky Chan confessed that he is a f...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, while, for example, in addition, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 31.9359605911 72% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1141.0 1207.87684729 94% => OK
No of words: 213.0 242.827586207 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35680751174 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13360499455 2.71678728327 115% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.643192488263 0.580463131201 111% => OK
syllable_count: 353.7 379.143842365 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.2662333468 50.4703680194 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.727272727 104.977214359 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3636363636 20.9669160288 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.54545454545 7.25397266985 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.392886785077 0.242375264174 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15426200318 0.0925447433944 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.125980314701 0.071462118173 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.237653480454 0.151781067708 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0721790572219 0.0609392437508 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 12.6369458128 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 53.1260098522 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 11.5310837438 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 55.0591133005 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.