Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:"A person should never make an important decision alone."
Since the dawn of humanity, it is known to us that Future is where we are making with our decision, not the where we get by chance, so it is very significant to make a proper decision. Some people think to make it on their own, where others, on the other hand, prefer to make it by counseling with others. I, for one advocate for the later one for quite a few reasons, for that two conspicuous reasons are explaining in the following.
The first justification for, considering others opinion while taking a decision is, get rid of the dilemma. Although we think our lives are unique, there is always someone close to us who has had a similar lifestyle as like us. If give us the chance, to talk with him about our situation, we might get to give the little weigh to our options. For instance, my own experience is compelling with this. During the time of my undergraduate admission, I had to select my preferred subject. Though I had a preferred one, after consulting with one of my cousins I found myself wrong. I found a new way to analyze that do not consider for the time being you are just passing rather consider the time you are going to be graduated. I get the whole truth of him after I graduated while seeing most of my friends are moving from here and there for a job just because of choosing a wrong. So, counseling with others is really worthful to take the important decision.
On top of that, medical issues are one of the most common ones, which badly needed others suggestions. As we always not have the precise knowledge of our recent medical issues. For instance, my father is a great example of this. We the family of him was in great worried about not having enough knowledge while my father was attacked by cardiac arrest, a few years back. Some people were advised me to take him to the local hospital, on the other hand, others were just opposed to this. That time, one of my uncle who already had faced the same problem, advised me to take him to the neighboring country from his experience. By considering his valuable advice and experience, getting back with proper and satisfactory diagnostic, I got a relief at that time.
Problems in our lives as waves are very unpredictable, some can be solved as like as blinking our eyes, where others needed supervisions. So to wrap it up, due to the aforementioned ground, I can draw a conclusion that, it is good to consult with others before taking a decision because it helps us to get rid of dilemma and because it helps us to know others experience and use it in our lives.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...will explore in the following essay. First of all, while we might think our l...
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...As we talked about his motivations, and some of the regrets associated with his ultimate ch...
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...e fully consider all of my own options. Secondly, I feel that when we...
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...uying the car I might have reconsidered whether or not it was a good idea. In co...
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...d whether or not it was a good idea. In conclusion, I strongly believe that i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, while, as for, for example, i feel, in conclusion, talking about, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 11.0286738351 190% => OK
Pronoun: 67.0 43.0788530466 156% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2010.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 436.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61009174312 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56953094068 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56476992679 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 212.727598566 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529816513761 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 642.6 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.7551956033 48.9658058833 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.235294118 100.406767564 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6470588235 20.6045352989 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.17647058824 5.45110844103 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125405142087 0.236089414692 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0508300436923 0.076458572812 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0609148776564 0.0737576698707 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0965763412783 0.150856017488 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0591581385486 0.0645574589148 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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