The study of an academic discipline alters the ways we perceive the world. After studying the discipline, we see the same world as before, but with different eyes.
Education is one of the driving forces of this world. Education provides an individual a sense of commitment and adds purpose to one’s life. The statement above suggest that individuals perceive the world with different eyes after studying a particular discipline. Although the statement tends to be correct, it is sure that the above case is not necessary for all individuals.
To begin with, study of an academic discipline does offer an individual to focus on areas pertaining to the study. This is most likely in case of most individuals out there. For instance, young millennials who wish to study technical related fields such as engineering and medicine, can be argued to have a technical look towards the world. Engineers, and in fact mechanical engineers view automobiles as series of activities such as chassis, suspension and so on. Similarly, Doctors and medical scientists look to each individual and make come up with radical thoughts to irradiate diseases that plague the human society. While the above statement seems to be true, the shift in view entirely depends on the nature and character of the individual.
What is to be understood is that, academic discipline provides the path for an individual to walk. Whether to walk the path offered or to pursue another path is entirely dependent on the individual. It is to be understood that all people are different. People come from different backgrounds, such as financial and social and have an identity of their own. They have their own interests and hobbies. Therefore, the statement stating that “pursuing an academic discipline alters the way one perceive the world” is not applicable to every individual. For some people study in a particular subject does change his or her views but in case of others it need not be the same case . For instance, just by pursuing engineering does not really have to make an individual inclined to look at the world as an engineer does. The individual may have hobbies and interests that he or she would like pursue as their career. On the other hand there are others who does take up an academic study because they want to pursue their career in that particular field of study. These individuals does look at the world in a different way. Therefore a study in a particular discipline need to necessarily promote different views. It solely depends on the individual.
Similarly, there are individuals who start to view the world in a different view, because of some unprecedented factors that affect them. For instance, environment conservation was not an academic study that was given due importance in the past century. However, the growing concerns of drastic climatic issues such as global warming, increased pollution levels have lead certain maverick individuals not to turn a blind eye to the situation , but to confront it and bring its effects to the minimum. It is not necessary that a study in academic discipline is the motivating force for this change. It can be seriously argued that certain individuals irrespective of whether they even received education or not are prominent personalities who leads the change. Therefore, academic discipline is not necessary to change the views of an individual.
Academic studies does offer a path to people to follow their dreams. However, it is no necessary that academic studies can change the views of all the people. This is dues to the simple fact that all individuals are different from each other. For some people, academic studies do change but in others, this may not be the same.
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- The study of an academic discipline alters the ways we perceive the world. After studying the discipline, we see the same world as before, but with different eyes. 54
- The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree 50
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, may, really, similarly, so, therefore, while, for instance, in fact, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 19.5258426966 149% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.3162921348 159% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 33.0505617978 127% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 79.0 58.6224719101 135% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2983.0 2235.4752809 133% => OK
No of words: 591.0 442.535393258 134% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04737732657 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.93056706295 4.55969084622 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86750511588 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 252.0 215.323595506 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.426395939086 0.4932671777 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 961.2 704.065955056 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 33.0 20.2370786517 163% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.4553132974 60.3974514979 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.3939393939 118.986275619 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9090909091 23.4991977007 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.06060606061 5.21951772744 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 19.0 4.83258426966 393% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276176609508 0.243740707755 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0784290651118 0.0831039109588 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0793888487467 0.0758088955206 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17235723649 0.150359130593 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.032188792717 0.0667264976115 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 14.1392134831 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.8420337079 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 100.480337079 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.