The study of an academic discipline alters the way we perceive the world. After studying the discipline, we see the same world as before, but with different eyes.
In this modern era, education plays a pivotal role in shaping a person morals and principle. it is the backbone of a person's success. However, in our country there are children who are not privileged to have preliminary education. I completely agree with the author's view that academic discipline alters the way we perceive the world and we see the same world with different eyes. Since, education shapes a person's moral values which are helpful for a individual to attain success in long run.
First and foremost, discipline is crucial to have success and school is the best way to have discipline in our life, moreover it helps to shape our morals values, with the help of which we could differentiate between good and bad. For instance, in this competitive world, you may find millions of people with talent and prodigy. However, there are few of them who have success in their life. Since, a person need to have discipline in his life and need to have relevant time-table to work, consistency also comes from discipline.
Secondly, everyone in this world dreams for success. However, to get success in our life, we need to think a solution in numerous perspective and find the most efficient way to solve it. Education provides us that ability to have different perspectives. For example, we can consider the idea of innovation, amazon it is an e-commerce website. Initially people used travel to grocery store to buy goods. However, amazon had made it easy by just sitting at home we order things and amazon will deliver it.
Additionally, academic discipline help us to respect others. since in school we learn to treat people equally irrespective of their gender , race and caste. children might find it easy to apprehend it, since they have learned this in school. However, we know there where many wars that happened because of discrimination.
lastly, education teaches how to work together to work in a team and makes us realize how we need to contribute equally to have success in both business and personal life. Moreover, it also helps children to be environment friendly and keep our surroundings clean.
To sum up, academic have a major role in our life and everyone should get it irrespective of all discrimination, government should help us in achieving this goal. Moreover, discipline teaches us numerous things like team work and contribute equally to have success, to think in many perspectives to solve a problem and choose the best among them. I completely agree with author and believe that education can build a person in morally correct way and realise our responsibility towards environment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, lastly, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 49.0 33.0505617978 148% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 68.0 58.6224719101 116% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2198.0 2235.4752809 98% => OK
No of words: 439.0 442.535393258 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00683371298 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57737117129 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80035047984 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 215.323595506 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.496583143508 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 706.5 704.065955056 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.38483146067 205% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.3581318529 60.3974514979 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5833333333 118.986275619 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2916666667 23.4991977007 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 5.21951772744 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 10.2758426966 195% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220744385442 0.243740707755 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0645781804481 0.0831039109588 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118893684066 0.0758088955206 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121316045689 0.150359130593 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0826807571383 0.0667264976115 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 14.1392134831 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 100.480337079 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.