As more and more students enter universities, academic qualifications are becoming devalued. To get ahead in many professions, more than one degree is now required and in future it is likely that people will take a number of degree courses before even starting work. This is an undesirable situation.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Over the past decades, the increasing provision of education seats in universities has undermined the demands of single degree holders. Experts throughout the developing and developed worlds have debated whether studying in multiple degrees before working life is a negative development to our society or not. This essay will assert the notion that the desire of graduating with more than one discipline has detrimental effects to both society and individuals.
To begin with, acquiring multiple disciplines to commence work might hinder the social development. More specifically, compared to those who acquire one degree, advanced learners who goal for being qualified by multiple disciplines necessitate longer time to graduate, resulting in a shortfall of workforce. In fact, by studying the figures provided by Hong Kong University in past decades, the average school life of their students who applied for single major discipline lasted for 3 years, whereas the majority of double degree holders consumed approximately 5.5 years. Furthermore, instead of repaying the society, learners might also occupy the seats that are allocated for junior learners and are likely to consume more resources in research. Therefore, it is conclusively clear that this phenomenon puts pressure on our economy.
Another implication that cannot be neglected is the ensuing working pressure. While degree holders of multiple disciplines can bear extraordinary jobs that are intolerable to their counterparts of single degree, they often find longer working hours and unstable life schedule in these jobs. For instance, graduates with knowledge from both musics and engineerings are more suitable to create an online music platform, yet they might have to accept the responsibility of both technical programming and business modelling, resulting in the fact that they often need to work overtime. Meanwhile, they are likely to devote more time and effort than their peers on business rather than family, because they believe that they are the minority who can fix the problems perfectly. Thus, instead of enriching one's life, the additional dedication increases the likelihood of parents' relationship problem.
In conclusion, the potential drawbacks of obtaining multiple disciplines prior to work is substantial to both societal development and personal growth. Having said that, given the keen competition in labour markets worldwide, it is predicted that graduates with multiple degrees will become increasingly popular in the foreseeable future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, so, therefore, thus, whereas, while, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2167.0 1615.20841683 134% => OK
No of words: 380.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.70263157895 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93580792015 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589473684211 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 678.6 506.74238477 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.9434380477 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.466666667 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3333333333 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149593232407 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0473416159172 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0394627107785 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0935340778639 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.028818880433 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 13.0946893788 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 50.2224549098 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.08 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.28 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 130.0 78.4519038076 166% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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