You recently took a part-time job working for a local company. After a few weeks, you realised there were some problems with the job.
Write a letter to the manager of the company. In your letter:
- explain why you took the job
- describe the problems that you experienced
- suggest what could be done about them
Dear Mr Harris,
I am currently working part-time on the factory floor of your company. I appreciated working for your company, but I feel that I must bring a critical issue to your attention.
Firstly, when I was interviewed and given a job here, I was told that my responsibilities would be purely administrative. In other words, I was informed that I would be working in an office environment rather than on the factory floor.
When I arrived for my first day of the work, I was asked to work in the factory just for one day to cover for an absent worker.
However, I have now there for over a week. Whenever I question a supervisor about this, they claim not to know about my position in the office.
As I was offered a different post at the time of the interview, it is illegal and unethical now to force me to work in other areas without disclosing it at the joining time. Additionally, I am unable to carry out any labour duties any further due to strain in my back. I would like you to investigate this matter, and rectify the situation as soon as possible.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
James Smith
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, look, so, as to, i feel, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 945.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 209.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52153110048 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77687619708 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612440191388 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 301.5 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7823942076 44.8134815571 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.75 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4166666667 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.08333333333 4.34317383033 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164454441078 0.216113520407 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0580985297147 0.0766984524023 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0446554048273 0.0603063233224 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0811812883243 0.12726935374 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0542323933441 0.0580467560999 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.64 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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