Compare the advantages and disadvantages of three of the following as media for communicating information. State which you consider to be the most effective.
Comics, books, radio, television, film, theater
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your won knowledge or experience.
Information is one of the fundamental needs for human well-being. In this contemporary time, technology have been advancing, allowing us humans to receive information and people are desiring more useful knowledge and source. In this essay, I will discuss both advantages and disadvantages for modernization by choosing 3 considerable source, supporting and explaining examples, as well as there will be logical conclusion.
It is certain that while our ancestors use restricted equipment in the past, nowadays, there have been a wide-range of source, facilitating us to gain knowledge, and moreover, learn foreign languages. In my view, books, television and radio are most effective for human to communicate information, among these technology. First of all, book is mirror of whole universe, which reflect society in reality manner. In additional, if there is no books, people never develop at present being because of their horizon. Fortunately, people, especially students use it broadly for their lesson.
Secondly, television is the fastest device for transfer data. For example, more and more news are being passed for whole world and journalists are able to interview in exact time and exact place. As result, thanks to television, we can acquire modern information and what is going on in world. However, there are several drawbacks that if people excess time to watch television, it have detrimental impact for eyesight and numb movement. Finally, elder people prefer to listen radio, instead watch television. Let’s take my grandfather as example, he is a really fan of radio, because it seems television or other screens more complicated for him selves. Moreover, it would permit people, who not be able to read newspaper or book because of her or him eyesight.
In conclusion, it is undeniable true people are receiving unmanageable information in this time. However, watching useful information and handling those can approve more efficiency.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 335, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'source' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'sources'.
Suggestion: sources
...odernization by choosing 3 considerable source, supporting and explaining examples, as...
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Line 2, column 304, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this technology' or 'these technologies'?
Suggestion: this technology; these technologies
...human to communicate information, among these technology. First of all, book is mirror of whole ...
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Line 2, column 429, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[4]
Message: Did you mean 'there are no books'?
Suggestion: there are no books
...ty in reality manner. In additional, if there is no books, people never develop at present being ...
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Line 3, column 382, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'has'?
Suggestion: has
...ple excess time to watch television, it have detrimental impact for eyesight and num...
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Line 3, column 559, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('really') instead an adjective, or a noun ('fan') instead of another adjective.
...s take my grandfather as example, he is a really fan of radio, because it seems television o...
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Line 4, column 147, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this can' or 'those cans'?
Suggestion: this can; those cans
...atching useful information and handling those can approve more efficiency.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, if, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, first of all, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1662.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44918032787 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0258120949 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616393442623 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 530.1 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.9082041831 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.7647058824 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9411764706 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.35294117647 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179015827703 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0570412327249 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0508615153349 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0945031613037 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0588956183175 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.03 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.