Childhood is the happiest time of a person's life.
Most people like to be others’ center of attention. Given a choice, some people may want to be born again. This is because they would like to enjoy the special privileges of early ages. Children have the best lifestyle and are happier than adults. Childhood is the happiest time of a person's life because in childhood, people are extremely cared for,and they do not have many things to worry about.
First, children are extremely taken care of by their parents and the entire community. Most parents love their children and are ready to sacrifice their food, time, happiness, and belongings for their children to live happy. For instance, in my childhood, I told my father that I wanted to go to swim. That day, my father scheduled to visit his friends. However, because he wanted me to be happy, he cancelled his appointment with his friends to take me to a hotel with a swimming pool. My father did not enjoy swimming, but seeing me happy was all he wanted. Similar sacrifices make the life of children happier than older people's.
Second, children do not have experience with worldly problems. Thus, they have very few things to worry about. In fact, children do not understand how their parents struggle to make money for a living. This is seen when children ask their parents to buy toys for them. They always expect their parents to purchase the toys and have a difficult time to understand that their parents may lack money. One of my friendsnamed Jean asked his father to purchase a bike for him. By that time, his father was jobless and unable to make such an expensive purchase. Consequently, he refused to buy the bike. As a kid Jean was upset because he believed that his father chose to ignore him. Later, Jean understood that his father refusal to purchase the bike was due to the fact that he did not have money. The example of Jean shows how children do not know much of the world suffering, which renders their life amazing.
In conclusion, childhood is the happiest time of a person's life because children have little experience with the world suffering, and they are given much attention. Parents are willing to do anything for their children’s happiness, which makes this period of life enjoyable. Furthermore, children do not know about the many challenges of the world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: persons'; person's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, may, second, so, thus, for instance, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1911.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 399.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78947368421 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46933824581 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54994272499 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.456140350877 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 584.1 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.0468557439 48.9658058833 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.5 100.406767564 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3461538462 20.6045352989 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.26923076923 5.45110844103 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179327033522 0.236089414692 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0494620647643 0.076458572812 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0978012199853 0.0737576698707 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159677793157 0.150856017488 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112007145457 0.0645574589148 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 11.7677419355 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.91 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.