solving questions using our own knowledge and experience or asking other people for advice
The examples of the famous celebrities around the world have testified to the common notion that one’s bright future is in his or her own palm of hand. In most cases, when one encounters with challenges, there are two ways for them to choose. One is using his or her own knowledge and experience to solve questions. The other one is to ask other people for advice. In recent years, a controversial proposal was brought to public eye, suggesting that the latter way is better. This seems reasonable in some aspects. However, from my point of view, it is better to rely on oneself.
To begin with, solving problem independently is a crucial quality, with which those who dreams of a career success all should be equipped. To some extent, it is common for people, especially those who are doing innovative work, to be faced with undesirable problems. In most cases, these problems are too hard to solve, thus amateurs are unlikely to offer constructive advice. As a consequence, one has to rely on himself or herself. Here is a concrete example to justify it. Thomas Edison, the greatest inventor the world has ever seen, taught us that solving problems independently is an essential quality. Just as he once expressed, “a genius is one percent of inspiration and ninety nine percent of perspiration.” Even though he encountered with numerous failures and conducted countless experiments, he never gave up. Finally, his efforts paid off. He succeeded in finding the most suitable material for the electric light bulb. But for his perseverance, never would he become so successful.
Furthermore, using own knowledge to solve problem is a good way to enhance one’s ability. To illustrate, as a common notion suggests, failure is the path to success. Even though one might fail to solve the problem on themselves, they would obtain precious experience from the course of solving problems independently. Undeniably, learning from the past mistakes helps avoid future challenges. When this works, progress could be made. For example, when I try to ride bike, my father told me numerous advice to help me. However, none of them worked. Later on, I tried to find the way with my own experience and knowledge. Finally, I mastered how to ride bike. Therefore, if I stop keeping trying on my own, never would I learned how to ride.
Admittedly, even though we have testified to the importance of solving problems independently, it does not mean that we should not ask other people for advice. In some cases, experts and teachers as well as parents are more skillful to deal with problems. Moreover, in addition to asking others, searching on the Internet and reading books are applicable solutions.
To sum up, the merits encompassed within solving problems independently outweigh those within asking for help. Concerning all the details mentioned above, there is every reason to believe that it is better to use one’s own knowledge and experience to solve problems than asking other people for advice.
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- People should not pay for public transportation agree disagree 95
- has technology made children less creative than they were in the past 90
- it is better to specialize in only one specific subject than to have broad knowledge of many academic subjects. agree/disagree 88
- land used for shopping mall or performance art center or hotel 76
- do some people like to spend time alone when relaxing 90
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 21, Rule ID: FAMOUS_CELEBRITY[1]
Message: Use simply 'celebrities'.
Suggestion: celebrities
The examples of the famous celebrities around the world have testified to the ...
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Line 3, column 686, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: ninety-nine
...enius is one percent of inspiration and ninety nine percent of perspiration.' Even tho...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, as to, for example, in addition, as well as, in most cases, in some cases, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 71.0 52.1666666667 136% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2527.0 1977.66487455 128% => OK
No of words: 500.0 407.700716846 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.054 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72870804502 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86592323693 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 269.0 212.727598566 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 788.4 618.680645161 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 3.51792114695 256% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 4.94265232975 263% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 32.0 20.6003584229 155% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.4304486689 48.9658058833 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.96875 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.625 20.6045352989 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.45110844103 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297243781105 0.236089414692 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0696555111124 0.076458572812 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104160319451 0.0737576698707 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19583636046 0.150856017488 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0995064984678 0.0645574589148 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 126.0 86.8835125448 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.