In the past, when students did a university degree, they tended to study in their own country. Nowadays they have more opportunity to study abroad.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development?
It is a burgeoning trend in the field of university degree that, students often get a chance to study foreign countries. While, in the previous years such opportunities might be limited and they intended to study in residential country. However, in this essay explain about the merits and demerits of innovative phenomenon like, globalization, cultural amalgamation, linguistic diversity and mitigation of custom and tradition.
It is true that, student migration has been escalating and which may leads to international student assimilation. In brief, students would have chance to mingle with foreigners and other co students from various countries often flourish the knowledge regarding numerous culture and tradition. such impacts may influence their behaviour, attitudes, ideas and skills which may often produce good understanding, critical thinking and able to face challenges in any aspects. Similarly, another advantage of foreign studies would enhance their studies, resources and materials and may provide an intelligent and brilliant citizens for the future. For instance, in India,many doctors and politicians who got PhD scholarship from other countries had a lead role in public.
Notwithstanding, there are some sort of disadvantages also emerging by this trend like, diminish mother tongue by the lower usages. Such as, international students widely seem to be the adore of foreign language like english and that would mitigate the importance of own language. Likewise, most presumably there were miserable side of language discrimination among the students itself. Furthermore, overwhelming use of residential customs and tradition might be minimize the real value of own cultural celebrations and traditions to some extent. For instance, overseas student explain in the friendship chat that, quiet often she may forget about the purity and value of local tradition by the influence of other culture.
To sum up, it is good to have an experience from foreign countries in terms of degree or post graduate course for the level of academia. Nonetheless, there are some kind of detrimental effects also picturesque in this essay.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, likewise, may, nonetheless, regarding, similarly, so, while, for instance, in brief, kind of, sort of, such as, it is true, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1828.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.60736196319 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08164828247 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592024539877 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 569.7 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.5378453726 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.866666667 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7333333333 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7333333333 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166062984682 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0535088624944 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.047527299944 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0973829456677 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0552061010485 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.86 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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