Nowadays, more and more people decide to have children later in their life. What are the reasons? What are the effects on society and family life?
It is true that many people interested to have baby years after the commitment. In this essay explain about the causative factor behind such inclination among the people and how which is affected not only their family but also society. However, the main reason for gap between marriage and baby is financial and settlement crisis and the after effect would be detrimental in terms of elderly primi mothers, lack of sustainable livelihood on forthcoming generations.
Initially, young people are more concern about their job and life fulfillment at any cost. Earlier, people wish to get marry and continue their generation as soon as possible and not bothered about the other problems. While today, everyone planned to get marry even after have a well job and bank savings, others who get married early makes laps between conceive. During that time, once they enjoy their life with either journey's, and other entertainment facilities or struggle to cope up with daily inflation or financial crisis. Moreover, other important fact such as, couples may have job in different places and somehow out of country.
Owing to the fact that, many families suffered with serious health hazards and escalating number of children with mentally ill in the society. The foremost problem related to this trend is aged mothers consequence such as, increased blood pressure difficult to get pregnant and follow up and sometimes maternal death to the core. Similarly, studies explains children with elderly gravida mothers prone to get many diseases and immunity problems and psychological issues. Surging amount of children in the community may alter the overall development of the nation and forthcoming years. Furthermore, people who spend money for treatment and medical problems would destroy stability of family foundation and future savings in some extent.
To sum up, it is good to being free of children in starting age of marriage, nevertheless, the pernicious effect on this thinks may degrade the well being of individual family and society as a whole.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 26, Rule ID: IT_IS_JJ_TO_VBG[1]
Message: Did you mean 'be'?
Suggestion: be
...ome extent. To sum up, it is good to being free of children in starting age of mar...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, similarly, so, well, while, such as, it is true, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1727.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26524390244 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65142081662 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615853658537 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 534.6 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.932915685 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.357142857 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4285714286 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.85714285714 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192531990225 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0608173857758 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495178575575 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102255577472 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.028272967291 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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