There will be a traditional celebration in your country and you want to invite your friend
from an English-speaking country. Write him/her a letter and
- invite your friend,
- explain what happens at the party,
- describe the tradition and why it’s important in your country,
- say why it is important for your friend to be there.
Dear Kate,
Hope this letter finds you in radiant health and the best of spirits. I am writing this letter to invite you to celebrate Nauryz in Kazakhstan. Last year when I worked in Australia, you wanted to visit me and believe me, it is the best time to come to Kazakhstan.
Nauryz marks the beginning of the new year and is celebrated several days starting from 21st of March, the day of the spring equinox. During Nauryz celebrations, past offences are forgiven and forgotten and everyone makes a wish to leave all badness and bring renewal in the new year. City squares get full of yurts (traditional nomadic houses) and many performances take place. Here one can learn about culture and lifestyle of the nomads, listen to Kazakh songs and plays of musical instruments, taste traditional meals like beshparmak, baursak, kuyurdak and other meals made from milk. Nauryz kozhe is the main dish served during the holiday. Traditionally, it contains seven ingredients that symbolize seven values, such as joy, success, wealth, health, intelligence, agility and security.
I would be honoured to have you as my guest during your entire stay here. I assure you it’ll be a memorable holiday for you.
Hope to see you soon!
Yours lovingly,
Balzhan
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1059.0 937.175257732 113% => OK
No of words: 210.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04285714286 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6669260078 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 127.690721649 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.685714285714 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 320.4 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.63391708 44.8134815571 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.25 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.25 4.34317383033 29% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174063439064 0.216113520407 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0636516667639 0.0766984524023 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0615996298211 0.0603063233224 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0942201817139 0.12726935374 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0557948821284 0.0580467560999 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 8.37731958763 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 8.71597938144 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.