In a cashless society, people use more credit cards. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this phenomenon?
The important effect of credit cards which was always debatable has more controversial with many people claiming that it is a beneficial while others reject this notion. The substantial influence of cashless society is very beneficial has sparked the controversy over the potential impact of this trend in recent years. In my opinion, the proposition appears to be more rational this essay will further elaborate both positive and negative effects of this trend and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
There are myriad of reasons which will further explain this argument but the most preponderant one stems from the fact that in the cashless society the people use more credit cards and debit cards instead of carrying cash in their wallets. For instance, if people lose their wallet and they have more money in their wallet so they cannot collect their money back. Another pivotal aspect of this argument is that the credit cards are safe our money properly because credit cards are linked with our banks.
However, there are some pitfalls that negate this argument and which can certainly overwhelm them potential influence of credit cards but the most alarming one is that if the people collecting only their cards for shopping then the shopkeeper have no machine to transfer their money with credit cards. As an illustration, nowadays everyone wants to collect only credit cards all the time but they know very well their society has no improvement. Hence, it is apparent, why many are against credit cards.
According to the arguments aforementioned above, one can reach a conclusion that the benefits of cashless society are instrumental indeed, however its potential drawbacks should not be overlooked either.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 205, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...wbacks should not be overlooked either.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, look, so, then, thus, well, while, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 20.9802955665 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 31.9359605911 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1453.0 1207.87684729 120% => OK
No of words: 280.0 242.827586207 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18928571429 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55340658809 2.71678728327 94% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 139.433497537 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539285714286 0.580463131201 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 444.6 379.143842365 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.5024630542 137% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.4640843312 50.4703680194 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.3 104.977214359 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0 20.9669160288 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.7 7.25397266985 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23180361465 0.242375264174 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0994030400273 0.0925447433944 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0489950052105 0.071462118173 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13269525172 0.151781067708 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0597311385194 0.0609392437508 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 12.6369458128 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 53.1260098522 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 11.5310837438 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 55.0591133005 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.3980295567 127% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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