People who do not use social media networks will always fall behind in career development opportunities.
To what extent do you feel that this is an accurate and important prediction?
In this day and age, many people think it is difficult to conceive of a life without social media, and those who do not get involved with any internet community will always restrict themselves to their career progression. While I acutely grasp the importance of social networks, I personally think it is quite subjective and excessive by saying “always” because the virtual world does have some drawbacks, as we shall see.
On the one hand, the internet and social media provide people with a range of benefits and opportunities to empower themselves in a variety of ways. Beside a wealth of knowledge and updated information which can be accessed freely, people are able to easily connect with others having same interests or goals without geographical barriers. It is true that nowadays, many people have significantly succeeded by posting clips relating to a wide range of topics from arts, cooking to political or philosophical viewpoints to social networks such as YouTube or Facebook. Not only are they paid for the appealing contents which attract millions of views, their reputation is also enormously enhanced.
However, a person’s career progression consists of many different elements such as professional certificates, working experience and social skills which require time and effort to achieve. Besides, working in a professional environment demands interpersonal skills, persuasive abilities or presentation methods which are used in face-to-face situations rather than remotely. More crucially perhaps, the repercussions of inappropriate comments or imprecise information posted to social networks may be tremendously severe. For example, a governmental officer is likely to ruin his political career and reputation if he says something incorrectly or aggressively in his personal Facebook page.
Overall, social media networks play an irrefutable role in modern societies but I am convinced that career progression chances are obtained by personal effort and competence. Therefore, we should consider social media as an effective means of communication, not a driving force to success.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, may, so, therefore, while, for example, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1810.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.65625 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24709004341 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640625 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 578.7 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 34.3106721331 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.833333333 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6666666667 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206616420329 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0673072417403 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0586676094443 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122033941905 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.05423862373 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.6 13.0946893788 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.17 50.2224549098 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.84 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.35 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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