In many countries, young people of eighteen year old allow to do things such as driving a car, voting and marry. What is right time to take this responsibilities?What is your opinion?
Age is an important factor to set limit on certain activities and minimum of eighteen years of age is considered to be an ideal age to carry out activities such as driving, voting and marry in majority of the countries. However, there are certain demographics of the society who argue to negotiate this age limit. Though, I do not completely agree with this group but I believe that age of marriage should be negotiated only and in this essay I will put plausible points to justify my opinion.
Firstly, I believe that 18 years of age is a perfect time to take responsibility to drive and vote. At this age, one is mature enough to take wise decisions such as electing a suitable candidate for the society. Moreover, young generation holds innovative thinking and vision. So, It will be of no harm to give our younger generation a right to choose our future leaders. Secondly, by considering other factors such as independence and convenience, It is important that young group is able to drive on its own and let their parents feel bit relaxed from certain responsibilities such as pick and drop. In addition to this, there have been plethora of instances recorded when mature people imperiled others lives on road with their driving because of the driving phobia as they started driving at later age. Therefore, I believe that an exposure to vote and drive should be provided at younger age of 18 to overcome fear and learn to use one's right for the benefit of the society.
On the other hand, I think that It is too early to marry at such an early age of 18. Though, one is mature at this age but financial stability and job security is also important for long run. Therefore, minimum age for marriage should be 24 and till the time one may have considerable time and autonomy to achieve one' career goals.
By hammering the final nail, I pen down by saying that certain activities need an early exposure at younger age and others need time and monetary stability. Therefore, It is important to understand and consider pragmatic aspects of both before setting any age limit on aforementioned responsibilities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, i think, in addition, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1751.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 369.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74525745257 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78086285156 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517615176152 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 585.9 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.3241051143 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.733333333 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.06666666667 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171543644517 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0646786586368 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0529207092096 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0959841095623 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0706719356396 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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