In the past, most people used to travel to their place of work. With increased use of computers, the internet and smartphones, more and more people are starting to work from home. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development?
In recent years, advances in technology have had an influence on teleworking which means that help people to do their tasks from home rather than commute to work like the past. In this essay I intend to argue that this development has both advantages and disadvantages.
The greatest advantage of working from home is that saves time and commuting costs. Teleworking and internet allow business people in different countries to interact without ever meeting each other, which may lead to reduce the travel costs. In addition, less commuting to the workplace leads to reduce high traffic congestion, which is one of the main cause of air pollution. Another advantage of teleworking is that people have less stress. In other word, the stress of commuting in bumper-to-bumper traffic at rush hour in big cities is extremely. This is especially true where the workplace is far from home. Other stresses include unfriendly coworkers, inconvenient work environment and constant distractions. So, working from home in their own environment at peace without any stress or distraction leads to more productivity.
Despite the advantages mentioned above, teleworking has some drawbacks. The most serious disadvantage of working from home is that people feel isolation and loneliness. The workplace provides a location to meet people and make friends, however working from home makes it difficult to get their colleagues and keep in touch with them. Another negative aspect of this kind of working is that danger of being overlooked for promotion. When you are away from the office and other more visible employees are actively in competitive situation, the possibility of getting promotion in career opportunities is much less. Face-to-face meetings with manager and regular visits to the office are critical point in order to prove your commitment to your career.
In conclusion, as it was discussed above, working from home by technological advances can potentially have both benefits and drawbacks. While teleworking can lead to reduce commuting expenses and stress, many people complain of isolation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, may, so, while, in addition, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1771.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3829787234 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96364897258 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 551.7 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.0054865504 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.3888888889 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2777777778 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.88888888889 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322806490068 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101256759866 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0724196708224 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194208484646 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0528895922175 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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