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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, for instance, i think, no doubt, as well as, in my opinion, in my view

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 10.5418719212 199% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 20.9802955665 138% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1631.0 1207.87684729 135% => OK
No of words: 294.0 242.827586207 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.54761904762 5.00649968141 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.0065616157 2.71678728327 147% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 139.433497537 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56462585034 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 379.143842365 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 4.6157635468 195% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.65517241379 219% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6551724138 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 20.5024630542 176% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 138.873143552 50.4703680194 275% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 203.875 104.977214359 194% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.75 20.9669160288 175% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.875 7.25397266985 219% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.12807881773 170% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 44.0 5.33497536946 825% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170842740898 0.242375264174 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0774069359089 0.0925447433944 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.077483801062 0.071462118173 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0824177120567 0.151781067708 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0615496214226 0.0609392437508 101% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.1 12.6369458128 183% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.48 53.1260098522 50% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 10.9458128079 169% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.5 11.5310837438 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.32886699507 115% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 55.0591133005 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.5 9.94827586207 206% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.3980295567 158% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.5123152709 152% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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